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Seething, raginng, full of bitter disgust,
Boiling and burning with unholy disdain.
Bending the world to what feels just,
Loosing your mind to hatreds dark reign.

I am the bodies in the river styx,
Quelling love and showing true might.
Only shown in the realm of Nyx,
I am the power in this fight.

Of The first sin of seven do I speak,
The power of wrath to destroy the weak.
©2009 ~WrathNE
:iconwrathne:

Author's Comments

"If a man say, I love God, and hateth his brother, he is a liar: for he that loveth not his brother whom he hath seen, how can he love God whom he hath not seen?"~John4:20


The first in a set of poems I am writing,

this is #1 our of 7

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:iconagentdarkmoon:
>.> So angry.....

The last line isn't right, I don't know if you were shooting for "to destroy the weak" or "destroyer of the weak" but something needs done.

Overall I like it, good descriptions~ Idle curiosity though, call me a dumb blond, but what/where is Nyx?

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DONT CLICK ON [link] BUTTONS, THEY COULD DESTROY THE EARTH AS WE KNOW IT!
:iconwrathne:
Last line fixed, typo.
:iconfallenheartedvampire:
Wrath is my sin of the seven. This is really good. I don't like the outcome of my punnishment in (If I go to) Hell. I don't think being ripped apart sounds too fun does it heh =/
I love your poem. I'll be looking forward to reading the others ^-^ (+Fave)

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"When you were born, you cried and everybody else was happy. The only question that matters is this: When you die, will YOU be happy when everybody else is crying?" -Tony Campolo
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"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world go blind." -?

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